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Clean up and clarify authz landing #1570

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@nmattia nmattia commented May 8, 2023

This improves the "authorization" landing page (i.e. when authenticating to a dapp) in a few ways:

  • The dapps teaser/header is removed as it caused issues on small windows (CTA not in view)
  • The copy is clarified
  • The alt origin dropdown is changed to appear upon clicking the dapp domain

@nmattia nmattia marked this pull request as ready for review May 8, 2023 12:58
This improves the "authorization" landing page (i.e. when authenticating
to a dapp) in a few ways:

* The dapps teaser/header is removed as it caused issues on small
  windows (CTA not in view)
* The copy is clarified
* The alt origin dropdown is changed to appear upon clicking the dapp
  domain
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LGTM, thx

"to_continue_to": "to connect to",
"is_alternative_of": "is an alternative domain of",
"auth_same_identity": "and you will be authenticated to both with the same identity.",

"first_time_create": "Securely connect to dapps on the Internet Computer",
"first_time_create": "Securely connect with Internet Identity",
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asked my self if it should be phrased "Securely connect with an Internet Identity" so just sharing, just in case

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Hm, I think it depends whether the product is also still called Internet Identity...

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Product did consider it, then went for the current wording

@@ -1990,7 +1990,7 @@ a:hover,
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.c-chasm__arrow {
margin: auto;
margin-left: calc(1.25 * var(--rs-card-bezel));
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side note:

@meodai 1.25 * var(--rs-card-bezel) comes few times in the CSS file, four exactly, should a variable be extracted?

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LGTM, definitely better wording than before.

"to_continue_to": "to connect to",
"is_alternative_of": "is an alternative domain of",
"auth_same_identity": "and you will be authenticated to both with the same identity.",

"first_time_create": "Securely connect to dapps on the Internet Computer",
"first_time_create": "Securely connect with Internet Identity",

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Hm, I think it depends whether the product is also still called Internet Identity...

@nmattia nmattia added this pull request to the merge queue May 8, 2023
Merged via the queue into main with commit 0ac4a54 May 8, 2023
@nmattia nmattia deleted the nm-landing-fixup branch May 8, 2023 14:33
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