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[Security Solution] Maintenance Window callout: Improve UI copy after tech writer review #157076

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Summary

Tweaked UI wording after consulting with a tech writer

Screenshot 2023-05-08 at 22 51 39

Addresses: #155099
Main PR: #155386

@nikitaindik nikitaindik added release_note:skip Skip the PR/issue when compiling release notes Team:Detections and Resp Security Detection Response Team Team: SecuritySolution Security Solutions Team working on SIEM, Endpoint, Timeline, Resolver, etc. Feature:Rule Management Security Solution Detection Rule Management Team:Detection Rule Management Security Detection Rule Management Team v8.8.0 v8.9.0 labels May 8, 2023
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@nikitaindik nikitaindik marked this pull request as ready for review May 8, 2023 20:48
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@nikitaindik nikitaindik enabled auto-merge (squash) May 8, 2023 20:50
@nikitaindik nikitaindik added the ui-copy Review of UI copy with docs team is recommended label May 8, 2023
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@nikitaindik nikitaindik force-pushed the maintenance-window-callout-ui-copy-update branch from 770b7b7 to 4649f04 Compare May 9, 2023 07:12
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💛 Build succeeded, but was flaky

Failed CI Steps

Test Failures

  • [job] [logs] Security Solution Tests #3 / timeline flyout button the (+) button popover menu owns focus

Metrics [docs]

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Total size of all lazy-loaded chunks that will be downloaded as the user navigates the app

id before after diff
securitySolution 9.1MB 9.1MB -21.0B
Unknown metric groups

ESLint disabled line counts

id before after diff
enterpriseSearch 19 21 +2
securitySolution 399 403 +4
total +6

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id before after diff
enterpriseSearch 20 22 +2
securitySolution 479 483 +4
total +6

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LGTM

@nikitaindik nikitaindik merged commit 352c8d8 into elastic:main May 9, 2023
kibanamachine pushed a commit to kibanamachine/kibana that referenced this pull request May 9, 2023
… tech writer review (elastic#157076)

## Summary

Tweaked UI wording after consulting with a tech writer

<img width="1329" alt="Screenshot 2023-05-08 at 22 51 39"
src="https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/15949146/236932465-43e6181e-c2dc-453a-b109-0ab22bbae695.png">

**Addresses:** elastic#155099
**Main PR:** elastic#155386

(cherry picked from commit 352c8d8)
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💚 All backports created successfully

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8.8

Note: Successful backport PRs will be merged automatically after passing CI.

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kibanamachine added a commit that referenced this pull request May 20, 2023
… after tech writer review (#157076) (#157158)

# Backport

This will backport the following commits from `main` to `8.8`:
- [[Security Solution] Maintenance Window callout: Improve UI copy after
tech writer review
(#157076)](#157076)

<!--- Backport version: 8.9.7 -->

### Questions ?
Please refer to the [Backport tool
documentation](https://github.com/sqren/backport)

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Co-authored-by: Nikita Indik <nikita.indik@elastic.co>
Co-authored-by: Georgii Gorbachev <georgii.gorbachev@elastic.co>
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